<html><body><p><font size="2">Hi Paul,</font><br><br><font size="2">Just read it in preparation of the call. I am not a lawyer, but it looks good to me. Two nits:</font><br><br><br><font size="2">(1) Redundancy in 'DATA WE COLLECT' section (two times 'browser extensions')</font><br><br><b><font size="2" face="Arial">Technical Data</font></b><font size="2" face="Arial">: internet protocol (IP) addresses, login data, browser type and version, time zone setting and location,</font><b><font size="2" face="Arial"> browser extensions,</font></b><font size="2" face="Arial"> and user agents, operating system, URL visited, </font><b><font size="2" face="Arial">browser extensions</font></b><font size="2" face="Arial">, methods ...</font><br><br><br><br><br><font size="2">(2) General:</font><br><br><font size="2">'the Site' vs 'this site'.</font><br><br><font size="2">I think we shall stay with what we introduced in the opening section, which is 'the Site' for referencing our http appearance. </font><br><br><font size="2">'SECUTITY' and 'THIRD PARTY LINKS' sections have 'This site' in the text. </font><br><br><br><font size="2">Best regards,</font><br><font size="2">Bernard.<br>---</font><br><br><img width="16" height="16" src="cid:1__=4EBB09F1DFD954128f9e8a93df938690918c4EB@" border="0" alt="Inactive hide details for "Paul Grun" ---12/10/2018 12:27:48---Advanced Technology Group Cray, Inc."><font size="2" color="#424282">"Paul Grun" ---12/10/2018 12:27:48---Advanced Technology Group Cray, Inc.</font><br><br><font size="2" color="#5F5F5F">From: </font><font size="2">"Paul Grun" <grun@cray.com></font><br><font size="2" color="#5F5F5F">To: </font><font size="2">"ofa_boardplus@lists.openfabrics.org" <ofa_boardplus@lists.openfabrics.org></font><br><font size="2" color="#5F5F5F">Date: </font><font size="2">12/10/2018 12:27</font><br><font size="2" color="#5F5F5F">Subject: </font><font size="2">[Ofa_boardplus] Voteable item for 12/13/18 OFA Board Meeting attached</font><br><font size="2" color="#5F5F5F">Sent by: </font><font size="2">"Ofa_boardplus" <ofa_boardplus-bounces@lists.openfabrics.org></font><br><hr width="100%" size="2" align="left" noshade style="color:#8091A5; "><br><br><br><font face="Calibri"> </font><br><font face="Calibri"> </font><br><font face="Calibri">Advanced Technology Group</font><br><font face="Calibri">Cray, Inc.</font><br><font face="Calibri">Office – (503) 620 – 8757</font><br><font face="Calibri">Mobile – (503) 703 - 5382</font><br><font face="Calibri"> [attachment "V_OFA Privacy Policy motion_2018_1210.docx" deleted by Bernard Metzler/Zurich/IBM] </font><tt><font size="2">_______________________________________________<br>Ofa_boardplus mailing list<br>Ofa_boardplus@lists.openfabrics.org<br></font></tt><tt><font size="2"><a href="https://lists.openfabrics.org/mailman/listinfo/ofa_boardplus">https://lists.openfabrics.org/mailman/listinfo/ofa_boardplus</a></font></tt><tt><font size="2"><br></font></tt><br><br><BR>
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